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The Seven Deadly Sins


Pride

You notice nothing, where only the best matters
Watch as your life swings past you, laugh as it scatters
Notice no beauty in anything, only your own greed
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Avarice/Greed

You always want more, money is all you are
All the times you fight for fame, your just adding another scar
Like humans are here, just to tend to your every need
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Envy

Constantly see others better, no more then Perverted Love
Like your waiting to die, like they will let you above
Like your forever waiting, you'll never precede
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Wrath/Anger

Living insane, unable to reason and smile
You think physical abuse is needed, you think its worthwhile
You see humans as nothing, only to mislead
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Lust

Females to you are nothing, just for Perverted Love
Like their here for the taking, just here to shove
You think their here for abuse, like to your sick shit they have agreed
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Gluttony

You always want more, you never appreciate anything
Like theres always better, you never see the pain it can bring
You want nothing but the best, you'd never dare to recede
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Sloth

You always delay on life, just to get what you want
Pushing off all your duties, your lifes just a meaningless flaunt
Just to trick and steal, off other lifes you feed
For you will slip into hell, where all of your kind will bleed

Take a look outside
Take a scent of the sweet calm air
Or open a window and forget your dispare
See life as a gift, instead of a curse
Feel the love that we have been given
Feel it everyday
Be the one to change someones day
Push aside the pain, push aside the dismay
See this life as a blessing
Love for all it is, dont let it dwindle away
The seven deadly sins...
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ElayCornelio23 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
yeah... I do admit, I am a sloth or an envy myself... T_T
Nice poem by the way...
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beruda Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool idea, but you need to work on your spelling and grammar. Otherwise, the poem is great.
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Nightcool Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
We all do these sins, but God still forgives us.
Very chilling, but amazing as well.
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MasteroftheStorm Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist
It is chilling, it sends a strong message, and it is eerily beautiful.
I have fallen victim to the seven sins more than I would like to admit.

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PekeCleo Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Wierd but beautiful poem!! ^^
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Kittycatze Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it! It is oddly and scarily a beautiful poem.
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Sebastianthesilent Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
A greatly woven description and poetic style you have, please continue to do great things such as this!
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Sunlights-Infinities Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Student Artist
This is just so beautiful, it describes the sins too well.
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DinoLover09 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Would Rage and Hate be considered in the Wrath category?
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HaloHunter96 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
Wow, this is amazing. (: Really great piece here
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